Kiwi Metaphor Monday

by Catherine Johnson @CatherinePoet

Hot spring

Bird’s feet casserole.

Kiwi fog

“That must be early morning fog cause my feet aren’t burning, are yours?”

“Nah!”

“Nah!”

The stream swallowed up the sun and escaped through the bushes.

The sleeping giant’s hairy nose twitched
as a delicious smell wafted by. (I seem to have read waft everywhere this week and now I’m writing it. It’s the week of the waft!)

Have any poems wafted into your minds looking at these pictures?

With silver coils and shimmering shroud,
what is that wafting through this caw convention
on this fine meandering Monday?
Mist on high in a deserted land?
A mystery of days gone by?
or the whiff of a new dawn?
Pray tell.

copyright of us lot ;)

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31 Responses

  1. Your post wafted by in my inbox. :)

  2. Beautiful pictures and excellent metaphors. I’m still in a fog, so no metaphors from me :)

  3. I will use that word, “waft,” in a post this week too! Fun post!

  4. As always I am distracted by your pretty pictures to think up anything!

  5. lol…. these pics are very cool. Did you take them?
    Mist on high,
    Deserted land
    Mystery of days gone by

  6. Caw convention
    silver coils
    shimmering shroud

  7. Meandering Mondays!

  8. Waft sounds like a speech impediment type of word hahahaa!
    Love your photos, especially the mist – IF you need worry-free photos please go here

    http://www.morguefile.com/ They have a perfectly safe free section where ordinary people and photographers share their shots.

  9. “The standing army goes green” (from the last pic) :)

  10. Maybe not metaphors…but some fun with words?
    Many mini-markings made by immobile marshmallow mounds

    Rindle-river running rivulets

    Yeti

    There was a piney, mountain-hat perched upon the land
    Its misty, cloudy, foggy brim was nothing less than grand.

    Who would wear such hat you say, curious for sure.
    Well there’s a Yeti underneath who keeps himself obscure!

    You wouldn’t really know it’s him, with such a wise disguise
    Only sporting bushy brows and hiding Yeti eyes.

    But if he ever shows himself, panic will ensue
    They’ll take his piney, mountain-hat and put him in a zoo!

    ~Penny Klostermann

  11. Catherine, you have such a gift for poetry. My mind just isn’t going in that direction these days! :)

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