Hockey

knee pads
shoulder pads
chest guard
skate hard
helmet
hand mitt
hockey stick
new trick
racing thrill
breathe out chill
slide in
glidin’
fast
blast
twice
ice
bold
gold

hockey

Catherine Johnson, 2013

I tried to get this to sound fast like hockey. Fancy writing a really speedy poem?

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27 Responses

  1. You achieved your speed! Nice poem!

  2. Interesting!

  3. Love it! I agree with Tina…I read faster and faster!

  4. By golly, Catherine, I think you did it! It does sound like a fast hockey poem. I love the rhythm!

  5. Clever! I felt what you were doing as I read the poem.

  6. A nice build up in speed to the goal Catherine. xx

  7. Fabulous! Fast moving and I loved the ride :-D

  8. I felt it! I was on the ice. The only thing missing for me was the way breathing heavy feels like on the ice. You are warm and cold all at the same time. Maybe
    Racing thrill
    Breathe out chill

  9. Please go to :
    http://www.thevibrantchanneledcreator.wordpress.com
    for 2 images I made to showcase Catherine’s poem
    Jeanne

  10. I really like the rhythm on this one! Breathe out chill . . . very cool!

  11. Racy and pacy – great!

  12. Exactly! Was a big hockey fan back in the day!

  13. We’ve been watching hockey all weekend – hurray!

    Lots of fights though – not my favorite part but I guess there is lots of pent up NHL frustration!

  14. That is AWESOME Catherine – it sounds just like hockey!

  15. Love it! I just need “gliding” to be “glidin.’”

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