knee pads
shoulder pads
chest guard
skate hard
helmet
hand mitt
hockey stick
new trick
racing thrill
breathe out chill
slide in
glidin’
fast
blast
twice
ice
bold
gold
hockey
Catherine Johnson, 2013
I tried to get this to sound fast like hockey. Fancy writing a really speedy poem?
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You achieved your speed! Nice poem!
Interesting!
Love it! I agree with Tina…I read faster and faster!
By golly, Catherine, I think you did it! It does sound like a fast hockey poem. I love the rhythm!
Clever! I felt what you were doing as I read the poem.
A nice build up in speed to the goal Catherine. xx
Fabulous! Fast moving and I loved the ride
I felt it! I was on the ice. The only thing missing for me was the way breathing heavy feels like on the ice. You are warm and cold all at the same time. Maybe
Racing thrill
Breathe out chill
Ooh thanks, Lauri. I hope you don’t mind if I add that :0)
Of course not!
I should clarify, “of course I don’t mind” (not “of course you may not”)
LOL
VERY FAST!
Please go to :
http://www.thevibrantchanneledcreator.wordpress.com
for 2 images I made to showcase Catherine’s poem
Jeanne
Awh, thank you, Jeanne oh talented one!
I really like the rhythm on this one! Breathe out chill . . . very cool!
People’s favorite lines are always someone else’s how funny! :0)
Racy and pacy – great!
Exactly! Was a big hockey fan back in the day!
Thanks everyone swish swish! glide
We’ve been watching hockey all weekend – hurray!
Lots of fights though – not my favorite part but I guess there is lots of pent up NHL frustration!
I really don’t like that about hockey. Look at the big guys in rugby and the tiny refs and hardly anything ever happens. I’m yet to love watching adult hockey I miss doccer and rugby (so English
)
Cricket?
Hmm… I suppose I watched a fair few international matches. Botham era onwards *snigger*
That is AWESOME Catherine – it sounds just like hockey!
Love it! I just need “gliding” to be “glidin.’”
Good point! Cheers Mike.